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Some of students' initial attempts may be silly. Others may look
sensible, but turn out to be unworkable. The best of the early attempts
may not even end up in the rough drafts.
None of those things matter.
At this preliminary stage, writers do not trying to evaluate their
theses or make them sound nice. They do not even have to know whether
the assertion is true. They just look for things they could assert
about their topic.
Notice that although the general subject is volcanoes, in a couple
of places the writer put a specific volcano in the topic column.
Unless they are responding to an exam question, give students
leeway to narrow a broad topic.
Thesis builder is faster than brainstorming a topic
Unlike traditional brainstorming about a topic, brainstorming
using thesis builder restricts students' attention
from an overwhelming universe of things to write about to manageable
number of good possibilities.
It is very possible that none of the statements created through
this brainstorming is a viable
thesis.
For example, the statement that "volcanoes are studied mainly
via computer models" is not a good working thesis because it's
not debatable: it's either true or not true.
A student might play with that factual statement and arrive at
the working thesis that "computer models provide the most reliable
means of studying volcanoes."
Students may also find that the list of statements contains several
that together suggest a good thesis. For example, the statements
contain three items that suggest something good coming from volcanoes.
That might lead a student to the working thesis that "the Mount
St. Helens eruption had a positive impact."
Suppose the student lacks information?
When
students do traditional brainstorming, they jot down phrases related
to what they already know. When they brainstorm to create a working
thesis, they often come up with ideas that they don't have information
to support.
Such thesis builder results from
authentic writing prompts present an unsurpassed learning opportunity.
When students decide on their own to learn more about part of your
curriculum, rejoice and be exceeding glad. Any work they do on their
own initiative is work you don't have to do.
More pages about writing and using thesis statements
Created 14-Jul-2009; revised 22-Jan-2010
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