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The easiest way for students to grasp the concept of the working thesis statement for expository nonfiction writing is to build some.

I want beginning writers to think of the activities of the writing process as simple, everyday-tasks. For that reason, instead of giving students a ready-made graphic organizer for thesis sentences, I prefer to have students scratch one for themselves just as I do for my own work.

My thesis builder is a simple matrix with the left hand column marked topic and the right hand column marked assertion/opinion. Josh and Caitlin can draw a vertical line down a piece of paper. They don't need me to download a graphic organizer from the web for them.

Students put their topics in the left hand column and then captures their ideas about that topic in the right hand column. The topic is a noun or noun-equivalent. The assertion is a verb phrase. Together they produce a full sentence.

Josh and Caitlin won't want to write the topic more than once. Insist they do it anyway.

It is essential that students understand a thesis statement as a whole sentence with a subject and verb. The matrix helps them learn the concept that a thesis is a complete sentence only if they build complete sentences. It does not help if students just put down fragments.

Thesis forum is place to discuss thesis builder use

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Some of students' initial attempts may be silly. Others may look sensible, but turn out to be unworkable. The best of the early attempts may not even end up in the rough drafts.

None of those things matter.

At this preliminary stage, writers do not trying to evaluate their theses or make them sound nice. They do not even have to know whether the assertion is true. They just look for things they could assert about their topic.

Notice that although the general subject is volcanoes, in a couple of places the writer put a specific volcano in the topic column. Unless they are responding to an exam question, give students leeway to narrow a broad topic.

Thesis builder is faster than brainstorming a topic

Unlike traditional brainstorming about a topic, brainstorming using thesis builder restricts students' attention from an overwhelming universe of things to write about to manageable number of good possibilities.

It is very possible that none of the statements created through this brainstorming is a viable thesis.

For example, the statement that "volcanoes are studied mainly via computer models" is not a good working thesis because it's not debatable: it's either true or not true.

A student might play with that factual statement and arrive at the working thesis that "computer models provide the most reliable means of studying volcanoes."

Students may also find that the list of statements contains several that together suggest a good thesis. For example, the statements contain three items that suggest something good coming from volcanoes. That might lead a student to the working thesis that "the Mount St. Helens eruption had a positive impact."

Suppose the student lacks information?

Thesis forum is place to discuss thesis builder useWhen students do traditional brainstorming, they jot down phrases related to what they already know. When they brainstorm to create a working thesis, they often come up with ideas that they don't have information to support.

Such thesis builder results from authentic writing prompts present an unsurpassed learning opportunity. When students decide on their own to learn more about part of your curriculum, rejoice and be exceeding glad. Any work they do on their own initiative is work you don't have to do.

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Created 14-Jul-2009; revised 22-Jan-2010
Comments by visitors to you-can-teach-writing.com

Equality made thesis clear

When you broke the Thesis statement into a Working Thesis = Topic + Assertion, that simple math sentence turned on the light bulb. It illuminated what had for so long eluded me."

~ Yvonne

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