Teaching punctuation
A solution to #1 comma problem
When
it comes to teaching punctuation, commas play a far bigger role
than their size would suggest.
Six of the 20 most common errors in student writing involve comma
usage. That's the bad news.
The good news is that those six errors occur in very clearly
defined, specific situations that rely on a tacit knowledge of
grammar all native English speakers have.
That means you don't have to teach the relevant comma usage rules
to people whose native language is English.
It also means that teaching punctuation requires you to help
students discover what they already know about English
grammar before you tackle teaching punctuation.
Students whose first language was not English need to be taught
by some other method. You can't expect them to have picked up
English grammar in a household where the spoken language was Urdu.
Reasons for the top comma error
One extensive study found the single
most common error in student writing (aside from misspelled
words) was failure to put a comma after a long introductory
element. The rule causes problems for one or more reasons:
Students don't know there is such a rule.
Students are confused about how long an introductory element
must be to require a comma after it.
Students don't recognize an introductory element.
Students don't recognize a sentence.
In teaching punctuation, you can address all of those areas by
working on the last one: sentence recognition.
An introductory element is a pre-sentence or
before-sentence modifier.
It is not part of the complete sentence. It appears at the left
of the complete sentence.
The other other really important thing to know about introductory
elements is that they could be moved to some place within the
sentence and still have the sentence make sense.
Let's simplify this even more:
An introductory element is a modifier at the
left of a complete sentence that could be put inside the complete
sentence and still have the sentence make sense.
Test for introductory elements
To find out if we have an introductory element that needs to
be set off by a comma, we have to see
If we have a sentence, and
If something ahead of the sentence can be moved inside
the sentence and still have the sentence make sense.
Remember the yes-no questions we used to identify the
sentence boundaries? They
will also identify introductory elements when you are teaching
punctuation rules to your beginning writers.
Move anything that was ahead of the original subject to
the end of the original sentence.
In each of the sets of sentences below, A is the original declarative
sentence, B is the tag sentence, and C is the yes-no sentence.
Example set 1
A (Original). FirstKathy got out the ladder.
B. First Kathy got out the ladder, didn't she?
C. Did Kathy get out the ladder first?
In this set, the yes-no question (C) suggests that the word first
can be moved from its original position without changing the sentence
meaning. We can test that hypothesis by rewording the sentences
again, like this
B2. Kathy got out the ladder first , didn't she?
C2. Did Kathy get out the ladder first?
All those sentences make sense, don't they? That means the word
first is an introductory element in that sentence. It can
be moved inside the sentence without messing up the meaning of
the sentence.
Do you see how teaching punctuation based on basic grammar knowledge
and some common sense put correct comma usage within the ability
of nearly every student?
Example set 2
Try to frame a tag and a yes-no question for this statement.
A (Original). In her excitement Maribeth failed to notice
the cat.
You'll come up with statements like this:
B. Maribeth failed to notice the cat
in her excitement, didn't she?
C. Did Maribeth fail to notice the cat in
her excitement?
Example set 3
As soon as you find the left hand boundary of the sentence, everything
else falls into place, as in this example:
A (Original). Before the noon whistle soundedKathy
finished putting up the storm windows.
B. Kathy finished putting up the storm windows before
the noon whistle sounded, didn't she?
C. Did Kathy finish putting up the storm windows before
the noon whistle sounded?
It is fairly easy to spot the introductory element in each set
when you use the tags and yes-no questions, isn't it?
But what happens if you think something is an introductory element
and it is really an essential part of the sentence?
Example set 4
If you mistake a part of the sentence for an introductory element,
you'll pick the wrong left hand boundary for the sentence. After
that, nothing will make much sense, as these examples show:
A (Original). For Abraham Lincoln to win the 2008 presidential
election was impossible.
B. Presidential election was impossible for Abraham
Lincoln to win the 2008, didn't it?
C. Did presidential election was impossible, for Abraham
Lincoln to win the 2008?
Let's try that again:
A (Original). For Abraham Lincoln to win the 2008 presidential
election was impossible.
B2. Abraham Lincoln to win the 2008 presidential election
was impossible for, didn't he?
C2. Did Abraham Lincoln to win the 2008 presidential
election was impossible for?
There's some wrong there, too, isn't there?
The only way you can fit either the tag or the yes-no questions
to the original is this way:
A (Original). For Abraham Lincoln to win the 2008 presidential
election was impossible.
B. For Abraham Lincoln to win the 2008 presidential
election was impossible, wasn't it?
That tells us that the original sentence begins with the word
for. Since there is nothing to the left of that word in
the original sentence, there is no introductory element. There's
no need to apply any comma usage rules.
Tags & yes-no help with other rules
Other basic comma usage rules where teaching punctuation via
tags and yes-no sentences works are:
Place a common between independent clauses in a compound
sentence.
Don't join two independent clauses with a comma.
Of course, there's more to teaching punctuation than teaching
three comma usage rules. However, if you can get students to see
that they already know a good bit of grammar, you save a great
deal of wear and tear on their nerves and yours.
Grammar: grief or glory?
How do you handle teaching grammar for writing? What worked? What blew up in your face?
Your fellow writing teachers are eager to learn from your experience. Please
share in grammar forum.
Linda Aragoni
GAA
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I have struggled so much with incorporating writing into our homeschool with
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~Jill
What is essential grammar knowledge for beginning writers?
The grammar students must know in order to edit their own writing
boils down to four
basic concepts:
Sentence
(which implies its opposite, the nonsentence.)
At my students' request, I wrote guides to help them keep on
developing their ability to correct their own grammar errors after
our course together ended.
The material I wrote for those students is now available to others
an e-book: Grammar Abusers
Anonymous. The book guides GED, college,
and adult students in learning how to study grammar using their
own error-riddled writing as practice exercises.
[Linda
has] done a fabulous job at organizing the work we need to accomplish.... Her
teaching style leaves you with the feeling that she cares about the student.
There are no "canned" responses and suggestions to her feedback :-)