A sentence fragment in spoken language often conveys a complete
thought to hearers. Spoken language has ways of compensating for
missing fragments of a sentence. By contrast, written language does
a poor job of suggesting the missing sentence bits.
Experienced writers sometimes write an incomplete sentence on
purpose, to create a specific effect.
Novice writers are more likely to write an incomplete sentence
by accident because they aren't totally in control of their writing.
They put traditional sentence boundaries (a capital letter
at the left and a period at the right) around non-sentences without
being aware they are messing up.
The answer is not drill on sentence parts or more worksheets.
Check wholeness with tag and Y/N
Writers can learn to spot
and repair a sentence fragment using Rei Noguchi's method of isolating
grammatical subjects.
Noguchi uses a simple two-part strategy for identifying the subject
in a declarative sentence. He creates both a tag question
and a yes-no question based on the original sentence.
Let me show you.
Tag and Y/N from whole sentence
First, look at this example that uses a complete sentence.
Original sentence:
If it does not rain tomorrow, he will go.
Tag question: If it does not rain
tomorrow, he will go, won't he?
Yes-no question: Won't he go tomorrow
if it does not rain?
Each of those sentences makes sense.
Tag and Y/N from sentence fragment
Compare that to this:
Original.
If it does not rain tomorrow.
Tag question: If it does not rain
tomorrow, does it?
Yes-no question: Does it rain tomorrow if?
Sensible tag and yes-no questions cannot be created from the fragment.
Fragment fixes
Often when students force fragments into the tag and yes-no formats,
they add words. What students add suggests what the fragment needs
in order to become a complete sentence. For example,
Original:
Just hanging out.
Tag question: Just hanging out,
are they?
Yes-no question: Are they just
hanging out?
To make both the tag and the yes-no question, students must add
a subject. That's a dead giveaway that the original lacks a subject.
If students put a subject with the original like this
They just hanging out.
most will hear that the sentence fragment needs a helping verb.
Students who don't "hear" that missing verb helper need
some formal grammar study (written and oral) to develop more upscale
grammar.
Want to borrow Noguchi's book?
Want to borrow a copy of Noguchi's book Grammar and the
Teaching of Writing: Limits and Possibilities,? Use the
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to find libraries around the world that have it.
If you live near a public college or university,
you may qualify for a community borrower's library card. The nice folks at the State University
College at Oneonta even helped me get a parking permit for the
year. Many private institutions have similar community borrower privileges.
It doesn't hurt to ask; that's how I got borrowers' privileges at Hartwick College.
Published 16-May-2009; updated 15-May-2010