Narrative paragraph
An additional essay development tool
Everybody loves a good story. For inexperienced nonfiction writers,
telling a good story is tough work. In fact, the standard English
class narrative essay is the hardest writing most students will
ever do.
Fortunately, outside the classroom students will almost never
need to write a personal narrative. They will have to write lots
of third-person narratives, however.
Start with impersonal narrative
I recommend you concentrate on teaching third person narrative
rather than first person narrative to your inexperienced writers.
Not all academic and business writing has to be in third person,
but a majority of it is.
Here's a first person narrative: I ate lunch.
Here it is in third person: Linda ate lunch.
The third person narrative is easier for students to use. Less
of their personal ego is wrapped up in it. Students can focus
on the writing apart from any emotional involvement they have
with the narrative.
Begin at the paragraph level
The easiest way to teach students to write narratives is to begin
by calling for a third-person narrative paragraph as one
of the pieces of supporting evidence within a traditional five-paragraph
essay format. The restricted setting forces students to craft
their narrative to make a point.
How do you call for a narrative paragraph? You build the requirement
into your writing prompt.
Narrative is chronological, selective
Basic narrative relates events in chronological order,
so the events are told in the same order in which they occurred.
No one can tell everything about even a small event, so narration
always involves selecting items to include and others to omit.
Writers have limited time and space, so they must chose the facets
of an experience that are most significant. Writers have to narrate
events in a way that
These two tasks present a formidable intellectual challenge,
particularly if writers have to keep their narrative to no more
than a single paragraph. That's why I recommend you hold off on
requiring narration until after students are competent writers
of the formula expository paragraph with its topic
sentence and three pieces of evidence.
Common narrative paragraph topics
Writers often have to provide a short amount of third-person
narration within an essay or other document with a non-narrative
structure. Common examples of such narratives include
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Description of a historical event, such as a war.
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Description of a process, such an explanation of the
method scientists used to conduct a piece of research.
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Plot summary of a literary work.
Such embedded summaries are a common requirement in academic
and workplace writing.
If you would like help creating writing prompts that require
students to include a narrative paragraph
in their responses, consider taking
one of my short, online professional development workshops.
Beyond 3rd person narrative
Learning to write third person narratives is a far more useful
skill than learning to write personal narrative essays. However,
that doesn't mean there is no place for first person nonfiction
writing.
The ripple strategy I teach my students for thinking about
potential evidence for their five-paragraph
essays starts by having them examine their personal experience
for items that are relevant.
Taking my cue from the APA Publications Manual, I tell
students to present their personal experience in first person.
You and I and other writing teachers must avoid giving students
the impression that their personal experience is sufficient evidence
for any point they wish to prove. Personal experience must
be one of several types of evidence students examine as
they analyze their writing topics.
Published 17-Apr-2009; updated 15-Jun-2010
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