Teach how to write an outline that is memorable as well as useful
You can teach all students how to write an outline or a strategic
planning device like a writing skeleton without too much
difficulty. Some students, however, need to know more than basic
outlining principles. Many students also need grammar skills they
can learn and/or practice in the context of outline format.
4 principles for outlines
When you teach students how to write an outline, you should teach
them to write outlines in which:
These characteristics enable an outline to be useful and
memorable to its author and other users.
Teach outlining in grammar
Each of these outline format characteristics can be taught in
the context of teaching grammar. Alternately,
you can teach the grammar as part of your instruction in how to
write an outline.
However you choose to teach the material, you should cross
reference your instruction. In other words, tell students
explicitly about additional applications of the material
you are presenting.
Students who are used to using terms like "everybody knows"
and "lots of students" must be forced to define who
"everybody" is and how many students constitute "lots."
Precise terms help authors define in their own
minds what they want to say. Only when the authors have a clear
understanding of their material can they communicate with an audience.
Concisely written points
Ideally, points should be written so they are no more than a
line of type. The fewer eye movements required to take
in the line, the better.
To achieve that conciseness:
Eliminate nonessential modifiers.
Use single words instead of phrases
Choose active voice rather than passive
voice, which requires more words.
Did you notice all the grammar terms in that list of ways to
achieve conciseness?
Parallel items in parallel structure
Using parallel structure for parallel points simplifies reading
and facilitates remembering.
Each section of an outline is essentially a list of points to
be discussed in that section. Good readers expect parallel ideas
in a list to be in grammatically parallel format.
If items one and two are nouns, readers expect the third item
in the list to be a noun as well. An unexpectedly different format
will distract them from the ideas.
Compare:
teachers,
doctors, and running a forklift
teachers,
doctors, and forklift operators
Any time a reader stops to wonder why a writer wrote something
in an unexpected way, that reader stops paying attention to the
writer's ideas. Parallel structure eliminates one source of distraction.
Absence of compounds
Any time a working thesis or a point of a working outline contains
compound elements, the compounds are a distraction. The
exception to this principle is compounds that are considered a
unit, like bread and butter.
(Since each elements of a compound must be supported with roughly
equal amounts of evidence, compound elements also increase the
work writers must do to develop an essay.)
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