Teaching students how to write a composition that is well-written
and well-edited but doesn't sound stale is an uphill job in most
English programs.
Typical English class students haven't much interest in their writing
topics to begin with. If they have to revise, they lose even what
little interest they had. The result is usually snoringly dull prose.
The cure is simple. First, have students write on authentic
topics. (Students won't have much interest in those topics either,
but at least they are relevant to what you are trying to
accomplish.)
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Then teach a writing process that minimizes rewriting and
energizes composition, namely the process I teach at this site.
Teaching students how to write a composition that is planned better
and rewritten less reduces essay-fatigue for both students and their
teacher.
Minimize rewriting
You can minimize rewriting by teaching students a strategic
writing process that incorporates evaluation
several times before students get to the composition stage.
Specifically, students can be taught to evaluate and revise
their work
Since none of those activities involve writing paragraphs, students
don't regard changes to them as rewriting. They are just fixing
things.
What's more, when students make repairs at those stages still have
not tapped all the elements that transform isolated sentences into
genuine writing. Students typically do not regard planning activities
as part of the writing process. In fact, they don't believe you
are teaching writing at all until you begin teaching them how to
write a composition.
Energize composition in speed drafts
The real secret of how to write a composition that is both well-planned
and spontaneous is speed drafting. For a short work, like an essay,
speed drafting means writing the paper at a single, hour-long
sitting without referring to the plan.
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Writers can speed draft longer works, like term papers,
in sections. Again the writers should limit themselves to
working with an amount of material they can physically capture
in an hour and write without without referring to their plan.
Have Joshua and Caitlin determine their theses, marshal their support,
find their evidence, and set it all down in a comprehensive plan.
Then give them an hour to write the essay without reference
to their notes. Set the composition time a day after they
finish their plans and after they've had some rest and relaxation,
so they are not already frazzled.
An hour is long enough for most people to concentrate on
a complex intellectual task without a break. For some students,
an hour is too long to sit. You'll need to watch students and adjust
to what they can physically handle.
Time pressure makes students focus their attention. The
challenge of beating the deadline energizes the students' writing.
As a result, their composition is fresher, more spontaneous, than
writing that's been rewritten a couple times.
Sounds terrifying to you? Perhaps it is. But fear is a great energizer.
Practice de-fangs the monster
Just so you don't scare students to death, you'll want to expose
students several times to this part of learning how to write a composition.
You can suggest they begin their composition session by scratching
a keyword outline. Chances are good that even if they are
panicky and cannot recall something, once they begin to write
they will remember.
Writing 400-750 words in an hour on a topic for which they
are prepared should be a familiar experience for students
by the the end of sophomore year of high school. Without
that kind of timed writing experience, students will be at a disadvantage
in many high school test situations, in college classes, and in
workplace settings.
Additions to the comprehensive plan
When students sit down to speed draft, they flesh out their plans
(English teachers call them outlines, but they are really plans)
by adding four elements:
None of those elements is hard for students to understand, but
implementing them requires practice. On another page, we'll look
at ways you can support
students while they are learning how to write a composition
that adds all those elements to their comprehensive plans.
Published 15-May-2009; updated 16-May-2010