You can teach students how to make an outline for a five-paragraph
essay or three-point speech easily.
The trick is to have students start with a working
thesis statement and build a writing
skeleton from that working thesis.
By changing the terminology you use to explain ELA concepts,
you can overcome much of students' reluctance to engage in strategic
planning process tasks and other writing activities.
Students are more willing to learn how to make an outline
than to learn how to write one. As long as they don't hear
the term frightening outline, students have no difficulty
putting their plans on an outline grid.
Start with a working thesis
A
working thesis is a sentence containing a topic
and an assertion set out in simple subject-verb order
without any frills. No introductory clauses, qualifiers,
or any compound elements should be in the working thesis. Just
use simple syntax, like this:
Computers can hurt you.
Let me show you how easy it is to turn that working thesis into
a powerful, three-sentence outline I call a writing skeleton.
I'm going to put some of the text in color so you can see the
parts easily. That's a trick that helps less verbal learners identify
the elements they need to attend to.
Then make a writing skeleton
To make a writing skeleton from a working thesis, follow
these directions:
1) Replace the period in the working thesis with the word because.
That leaves you with a sentence
fragment:
Computers can hurt you
because
2) Make three copies of that sentence fragment.
Computers can hurt you
because
Computers can hurt you
because
Computers can hurt you
because
3) Pretend there is a blank after each occurrence of the word
because. Fill in each blank to make a complete
sentence.
The result is a simple sentence outline containing the topic
sentences of three body paragraphs that support the thesis
statement. It looks something like this:
Computers can hurt you
because
computers can cause eyestrain.
Computers can hurt you
because computers
can cause repetitive stress injury to hands.
Computers can hurt you
because computers
can cause neck and back strain.
In other words, students have a three-point sentence outline
in two shakes of a lamb's tail.
The three-point outline works for all sorts of communications.
It can be used for the academic five-paragraph essay, emails,
reports, books, etc. It is also the basic outline for public speakers.
Once students have learned how to make an outline by preparing
a writing skeleton, they can help each other plan their
essays orally with guidance from Talk
It Out questions for thesis-and-support writing projects.
Need to see another example of a 3-point outline? Click
here. Or see how to put
flesh on the skeleton using ripple strategy.