When
people talk about essay format or expository
essay format, they are
really talking about the persuasive essay's pattern. This
is a pattern in which a thesis
statement is supported by evidence. I often refer to
it as the thesis + support pattern.
All the information supporting the thesis of the persuasive essay
is arranged in emphatic order. That simply means placing
information within the essay body so it makes the maximum impression
on readers. Call it the Wow! factor.
Classical formula: 1, 2, 3
Over the centuries, writers and researchers have settled on a
format that achieves that maximum impression most of the time.
The pattern arranges elements supporting the in sets of three:
Pros vary the pattern
Most of the essays you see in print are variations on the basic
thesis + support (persuasive essay) pattern by experienced and
professional writers. They use the pattern so well that it becomes
invisible.
That's why many people including some English teachers
(gulp!) don't realize that there is a basic pattern for
the persuasive essay. It
is also why:
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People have so much trouble writing.
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Many people think writing can't be taught.
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Students dont learn to write well by reading good writing.
Youll be surprised at how simple the pattern is once you
know how its parts are arranged.
Note on terminology: The
phrase expository format confuses students because all
essays are expository regardless of how they are organized. Essay
structure suffers from the problem. It is better not to use
terms guaranteed to confuse students.
Persuasive pattern is my second choice, since the most
obvious examples of thesis + support are usually found in persuasive
essays.
Teach the pattern as writing tool, then...
You can present essay format in 20 minutes. Your students will
need perhaps 20 weeks to begin to be able to use it.
Have students practice using it in their writing a few times
until they have at least figured out the the difference between
a generalization and evidence.
Then begin having students use it as a reading
comprehension technique. What they learned about the essay
format of thesis + support will be obvious sooner in their reading
skills than in their writing skills.
Slow and steady
You need to use a slow-and-steady
approach. Even though the format is simple to recognize once
you know the pattern, it isnt easy to put into practice
in writing. Students
will need many opportunities to practice using the format before
it becomes second nature.
As they keep practicing writing, students will figure out how
to translate the essay pattern into their own essays. It
takes a while for things to click, but once students really understand
essay format, they turn into writers almost overnight.
Do you learn better through pictures?
If you haven't done so already, I suggest you check
out the graphics showing essay format. Students (and perhaps
you) may find it easier to grasp the structure of an essay by
looking at a visual representation than by reading words.
Published 29-April-2008; updated: 15-Jun-2010