The best way to enable students to learn to write is to teach
them one way of structuring essays until they learn that format
well enough to make conscious choices about when to vary the pattern.
Before you start screaming about how
awful I am expect all students to write one way, please read "Linda
says" at the right about the difference between a pattern
and a law.
Essay structure actually depends on the type
of essay. However, most of the time people use the term to
refer to the organizational pattern of one type of essay: the
expository essay, sometimes called the informative or
persuasive essay.
Since each of those terms could apply to essays organized in
very different ways, none of them is particularly useful for instructional
purposes.
One pattern called by many names
I use the term thesis-and-support or persuasive
essay pattern when I talk about what texts call
essay format or structure. Thesis-and-support is the more descriptive
term, but the persuasive essay
is the place students are most likely to be able to see the organization
clearly.
Evidence supports generalizations
Generalizations may be either facts or opinions. They
don't have any single identifiable source. They can be information
"everybody knows," or a summary of several specific
facts or opinions from named sources.
People assess whether the generalization is true by examining
the amount and quality of the evidence on which it is based. Evidence
is information that can be attributed to a specific source,
like Uncle Joe or Shakespeare.
Focus on body paragraphs
In discussing the organizational structure of an essay, we ignore
the introduction and conclusion.
Introductions
and conclusions
have no set pattern. They have functions they must perform,
but writers are free to craft beginning and ending paragraphs
however they wish.
The body section, however, has a very distinctive pattern: for
every generalization, there are three supporting reasons.
So, when we dicuss essay organization, we focus on the body paragraphs.
The thesis is a generalization
The biggest generalization in the essay is the thesis
statement. It is supported by three reasons to believe it
is true.
The supporting reasons are the topic
sentences of the body paragraphs. Each of the topic sentences
is a generalization that summarizes the evidence in its paragraph.
In the essay structure template, the body
paragraphs are each supported by three pieces of evidence.
They are each specific bits of information from an identified
source.
Here is a visual representation of that structure. It represents
the body of a five-paragraph
essay, five paragraphs being the shortest piece of writing
that can display all the features of the essay structure.
Note the repeated pattern of topic sentence and evidence.
That pattern is the distinguishing feature of the expository paragraph.
No matter how many paragraphs you have to write to complete an
essay two or 22each follows that pattern.
Once students understand how
to link a thesis statement to a topic sentence, structuring
an essay becomes a matter of repeating the expository paragraph
format for each of the body paragraphs.
Sounds easy, right?
Getting all those easy parts together isn't easy for students.
They
have to go through the essay writing process many times before
they actually understand essay structure.