The
best reason for creating an outline is so writers find out fast
whether the thesis they have chosen will work.
Making outlines because the teacher demands one is a waste of
time the teacher's time as well as the students'.
For a five-paragraph essay, writers need at least three points
to start with, or theyre dead in the water.
Writers cant be absolutely sure their thesis will work
if they can write a three- to five-point outline about it, but
they can be pretty darn sure it wont work if they cant
write at least three points.
Why three points?
Coming up with at least three points right at the start is a
good insurance policy. Four is even better. Five is an
embarrassment of riches.
What usually happens to beginning writers (and sometimes to those
of us with more experience) is that one of their original points
fizzles. Perhaps it turns out that two of the points really overlap.
Or maybe there is no evidence to support one of the points.
If writers start out with only two points and
one fizzles they either have to get a new thesis or do some
serious research quickly to find one or two new points for the
body paragraphs.

No wonder students pull their hair and bite their nails! Supporting
a thesis is tough!
Theres no virtue in many main points. In fact, having
more than five main points is risky. Writers must be able
to remember their points when they sit down to compose.
Most people can remember three points without difficulty. Beyond
three, it gets increasingly difficult for people to recall the
points.
I know you're wondering how a 5-paragraph
essay can have only 4 paragraphs. That is a really important
issue that deserves a page or two.
For now, let me suggest an analogy. If you copy a dress pattern
exactly, what you will get is a dress pattern. If you want a dress
based on the pattern, you have to make at least a few modifications.
Outline points = topic sentences
For the kinds of expository assignments students do in middle school
and high school, the outline must have a thesis statement and
as many main points as body paragraphs in the finished piece.
Each of the three main points of the outline will become the
topic sentence of its body
paragraph.
Note that the introduction
and conclusion paragraphs
arent included on the outline. When
creating an outline, you focus all your attention on the body
paragraphs.
For longer papers, like term papers, students usually have
fewer main points than body paragraphs. That happens because longer
papers develop more complex ideas. A single complex idea may take
several paragraphs to develop.
Make plans instead of outlines
I have students make a topic-sentence outline prepared a special
way to keep focus on the thesis. Instead of creating an outline,
I have students create a writing skeleton.
Changing my terminology takes the stress out of the whole business
of creating an outline.
Planning is far less stressful for students than preparing
outlines. Everybody makes plans. Weirdos make outlines.
I do not require students to do outlining beyond the initial
writing skeleton. Instead, I teach students to plan their
writing following a five-paragraph essay template
that looks like a form for them to complete. Its really
an outline, but I never say that.
With little effort, students end up with detailed plans that lack
only traditional numbering to be considered formal
outlines. Nobody gets stressed out over creating an outline.
Everybodys happy.
Published 28-Feb-2008; updated: 15-Jun-2010