Think
of the 5 paragraph essay as training wheels for writers.
Once students can do the written equivalent of steering, balancing,
and pedaling simultaneously, they won't need the 5 paragraph format
any more.
Sad to say, some teachers do give students those erroneous impressions.
Plan on teaching planning
When you teach the 5 paragraph essay, you should expect to spend
most of your time teaching planning strategies.
Not only is planning really tough for beginning writers, but
it is the activity with the greatest potential to improve students'
writing and students' grades quickly. Even students who don't
care about having better writing don't mind having better grades.
The 5 paragraph essay as a process
Teach the 5 paragraph essay as a way of thinking about a subject
that could be turned into an expository essay five paragraphs
long.
If you teach essay-writing this way, you can honestly tell your
supervisor you are teaching critical
thinking strategies. The systematic analysis that the 5 paragraph
essay entails certainly is critical thinking.
The planning process may yield five paragraphs, or it might produce
a book. It might produce a persuasive essay, but it could just
as easily show the writer that she needs to develop her material
as a narrative essay instead.
Gathering the prescribed amount of material is an attempt to
be sure writers have appropriate material from which to
choose content that will be effective with their readers.
5¶ essay may not have 5 paragraphs
Don't let students think the goal is exactly 5 paragraphs
each of which contains exactly three points. Students who
write with those numerical goals in mind produce the awful prose
that the 5 paragraph essay detractors abominate.
(On the other hand, you don't need to tell students first day
of class that they can get by with writing fewer than 5 paragraphs.
Cross that bridge when you come to it. )
Some students will never find themselves in situations where
the standard 5 paragraph product is out of place. When you teach
the 5 paragraph essay as a process instead of a product,
it becomes useful for preparing material for a wide
array of writing and speaking situations. I use it daily for
writing everything from textbooks to marketing materials.
Students who need or want to write in other ways will find it
easier to learn other genres and to develop material to fit in
those genres if they previously learned to think about writing
projects using the 5 paragraph essay process.
Let writing become reinforcing
Preparing a working thesis
and writing skeleton
are planning strategies. Both can be taught and learned by formulas.
Because they affect the total piece of writing, students can make
huge changes in their essays by changes to one of those few sentences.
By teaching students to plan before they write, you let the
act of writing become reinforcing. If the first sentence Josh
writes is a sensible working
thesis sentence, that initial success makes it more likely
that he will go on to prepare a 3-sentence writing
skeleton.
By contrast, the popular writers' workshop strategy that
has students write and rewrite to find their thesis does not give
positive reinforcement soon enough to be effective with beginning
writers or with writers who have learning difficulties.
Let students work in short bursts
Beginning writers do better work if they work in several short
sessions. The sessions need to be arranged so students end
each session with something finished.
For example, if students have a fairly restricted topic, they
usually can prepare a working thesis and writing skeleton
in a half hour. Because those items are written in full sentences,
students not only reach closure, but also have no difficulty picking
up the work later to do the next step.
How long will students need at each stage?
Once students know what to do and have had a bit of practice,
I suggest beginning writers ought to be able to complete various
stages of their essays in roughly the following times:
Session 1: Prepare working
thesis and writing
skeleton (30 minutes).
Session 2: Complete a full-sentence
plan (3045 minutes).
Session 3: Compose
(draft) the
essay (60 minutes).
Session 4: Revise the essay
(15 minutes)
Session 5. Edit the essay
for three mechanical errors one at a time (5-15 minutes per error).
Your students may take more or less time, but beginners shouldn't
be allowed to spend much more time at one sitting. Taking a lot
more time is usually a symptom of lack of focus. Students develop
a distaste for writing if it takes too longeven if the reason
it takes long that they were woolgathering.
Minimize pre-draft writing
Many students who are just starting to learn to write expository
essays find the physical act of writing difficult. Minimize
the amount of handwriting they must do so they can concentrate
on planning.
You can make graphic organizers in minutes using the Tables
function in your word processing program and print them for students.
See some on my page about the outline
template.
Or set up a table on the computer and let students input
their plans there. Then they can use copy and paste to eliminate
some of the drudgery.
Created 21-Mar-2009; updated 22-Jan-2010